Oooo cool! You finally finished it! Looks great I love how you did the effects, lighting, hair... just about everything!
My CC is.... the lights themselves look kinda've weird to me. I don't know, I mean, I know it's solid black background, and they are bright, but I think they should look a little more transparent as they near away from the actual light source.
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I agree about the lights
They're more stylized than anything else... But since this IS technically a cartoon, I'm allowed to stylize things
Plus I was getting a little bit annoyed with those lights
But yes, you're right
Thanks for commenting!
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sakura's hair's really pretty, clothes are nice, but i think her hair line thing should be lower, head looks kinda flat? pose is good
sasuke.. KYAAA x100 :]
naruto, he looks like he has a big nose, his face is .. neh, the drums and the lights are cool *and the dry ice?* ice ice baby :]
i think the whole picture, the person-that-looks-like-kakashi? hes the coolest :] his pose and clothes are really good. the lighting and his pose is just right. good job! :]
*wants to be an audience for this band* i'll have to go hug sasuke and that guy on the left :]
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star light, star bright,
first star i see tonight;
i wish i may, i wish i might,
have the w i s h i wish tonight.
Yup, the guy on the left is Kakashi (No, it's Chouji )
But because I don't actually know what his face looks like, I cheated and made him backlit
Sakura's head was originally tilted up But I guess that idea kind of died and I forgot to change the hairline... Whoopsies
Yup, dry ice (Yay, somebody can tell! )
I tried to make Naruto look older
Thanks for commenting! again!
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Sakura's hair was really dazzling and it moves! I like that.
The smoke and effects are too cool! I can't handle those things... and the number of layers... my computer won't handle those! Hahahha!
And yes, I agree to about the lighting effects. They should be transparent.
What else... AH! I can't stop myself drooling over Sasuke (okay Crystal don't kill me!!) But I think he should lean more I mean the pose. The bass guitarist's pose it too cool! And hey, why the very dark mood from Uchiha Sasuke. I know it's because of the shadow but.. err ... SASUKE LOOK AT ME!!! XP
And I want to congratulate you for finishing this one!!!
muwahaha, this iz le awesom Skye!
SR-71 iz teh bomb! (I have both there CDs >.> )
God, I love the light and smoke effects, I think that's what makes this picture really awesome!
I'm finding it hard to come up with any critiquing, because it really is a good quality picture.
The mike seems a little big, but I guess they can come that big >.>
The way you shaded/huglighted for multiple lightings is absolutely superb <3
There/is something bothering me about Sakura's face...but I can't put my finger on it...
Naruto's expression is kyuute ^^
And sakura's pants seem a little long from the top-crotch
Really, REALLY nice picture skye <3
yur shading/highlighting is so nice ;_: I wish I could color liek that...
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if i liked naruto i don't think i'd be able to get to the fav button fast enough...
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And thanks for commenting, even though you don't like Naruto
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My CC is.... the lights themselves look kinda've weird to me. I don't know, I mean, I know it's solid black background, and they are bright, but I think they should look a little more transparent as they near away from the actual light source.
--
(^'o')>----<;_3 __
/ \ l
Hey! Let go! MY WORM! <=0=>
They're more stylized than anything else... But since this IS technically a cartoon, I'm allowed to stylize things
Plus I was getting a little bit annoyed with those lights
But yes, you're right
Thanks for commenting!
--
Ask me for crits!
Ignorance killed the cat. Curiosity was framed.
Proud admin of ~The-GoldenSun-Club.
sakura's hair's really pretty, clothes are nice, but i think her hair line thing should be lower, head looks kinda flat? pose is good
sasuke.. KYAAA
naruto, he looks like he has a big nose, his face is .. neh, the drums and the lights are cool *and the dry ice?* ice ice baby :]
i think the whole picture, the person-that-looks-like-kakashi? hes the coolest :] his pose and clothes are really good. the lighting and his pose is just right. good job! :]
*wants to be an audience for this band* i'll have to go hug sasuke and that guy on the left :]
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star light, star bright,
first star i see tonight;
i wish i may, i wish i might,
have the w i s h i wish tonight.
You're welcome
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(^'o')>----<;_3 __
/ \ l
Hey! Let go! MY WORM! <=0=>
But because I don't actually know what his face looks like, I cheated and made him backlit
Sakura's head was originally tilted up
Yup, dry ice
I tried to make Naruto look older
Thanks for commenting!
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Ask me for crits!
Ignorance killed the cat. Curiosity was framed.
Proud admin of ~The-GoldenSun-Club.
Thank you for doing so anyway
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Ask me for crits!
Ignorance killed the cat. Curiosity was framed.
Proud admin of ~The-GoldenSun-Club.
Sakura's hair was really dazzling and it moves! I like that.
The smoke and effects are too cool! I can't handle those things... and the number of layers...
And yes, I agree to
What else... AH! I can't stop myself drooling over Sasuke (okay Crystal don't kill me!!) But I think he should lean more I mean the pose. The bass guitarist's pose it too cool! And hey, why the very dark mood from Uchiha Sasuke. I know it's because of the shadow but.. err ... SASUKE LOOK AT ME!!! XP
And I want to congratulate you for finishing this one!!!
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SR-71 iz teh bomb! (I have both there CDs >.> )
God, I love the light and smoke effects, I think that's what makes this picture really awesome!
I'm finding it hard to come up with any critiquing, because it really is a good quality picture.
The mike seems a little big, but I guess they can come that big >.>
The way you shaded/huglighted for multiple lightings is absolutely superb <3
There/is something bothering me about Sakura's face...but I can't put my finger on it...
Naruto's expression is kyuute ^^
And sakura's pants seem a little long from the top-crotch
Really, REALLY nice picture skye <3
yur shading/highlighting is so nice ;_: I wish I could color liek that...
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